Nice start but scripting needs tweaking...

Admittedly, I've never sat down and writeen a script for anything, let alone attempted a movie longer than 30 seconds long, however, you've got a lot of potential there ... but you killed it with humour that ... wasn't that funny, and the predictable ending goes without saying. I like your style though, despite the Ice dudes weird voice, the sound was good as well. Work on the comedy or et some help before your next one, but definately keep it up!!!